Original Planned Outlines

The first book didn’t go the way I originally planned. Here is an old outline I found about how it would go. Needless to say, it changed.

  • Filynora’s problems are introduced. Her mother is gone, she acknowledges that she is different from the other girls in her village but she has no confidence in herself, she is threatened by the boys.
  • Her strengths are acknowledged. She is an amazing archer, outshooting all the boys and most of the men in her village. She has a special relationship with Elementals. She has learned to take care of herself and is very self reliant.
  • Filynora leaves her farm to find her mother, releasing all the animals, except Ember who refuses to leave her.
  • During her travels, she meets various dark creatures, whom she escapes with varying degrees of closeness, with Ember helping her.
  • She gets wounded and is saved by an Elthinor, a shy Elvin lad who has as little confidence as she does.
  • He is running from his past in his own village and they hesitantly begin to travel together without talking much.
  • They run into more problems and discover a clue to Filynora’s mother.
  • While tracking the creatures further, they meet a Dwarf, Valtrak, who saves Filynora’s life, and he joins them, tired of his boring life in the caves.
  • They track the creatures down where a massive fight ensues.
  • The creatures are all wounded in some way or another and Filynora’s mother is saved.
  • They start travelling back, but a couple days in the creatures return and attack during the night and kill her mother.
  • Outraged, Filynora follows them back to a major city and is confronted by many dark creatures in the streets.
  • With Elthinor, Valtrak, and Ember beside her, she declares that she will take down the dark masters who rule the humans.
  • She is branded a dangerous rogue and traitor and a bounty is put on all of their heads.

And here is the original outline for the second book. I didn’t bother to do one for the third book, as the first two didn’t go as planned.

  • Tensions rise between the four members of the group from the rising chill and lack of sleep from being wary of attack from the Vampires or Naga.
  • They skirt around the Centaurs only to be captured by the Dwarves and taken in to be slaves for the noble Dwarves of the city.
  • They meet Valtrak and Filynora befriends him.
  • Valtrak shows Filynora where the scroll is and gives it to her, against the rules of the Dwarves.
  • Filynora convinces Valtrak to help them escape and the get out of the caves and make their way towards the Satyrs in the deep west mountains, where the clue pointed them to, Valtrak trailing them for a few days before revealing himself to them after an attack.
  • Filynora and the others are received by the Satyrs, who have a backwards way of life from all the other races. They have a very matriarchal culture, and are glad to give Filynora and her friends as long as she keeps them in check.
  • They meet Pinnathir, a young Satyr lad who falls in with them while they stay the winter with the Satyrs. Filynora, Nolan, and Gabrithon receive swords forged by the Satyrs.
  • As spring breaks they stumble upon the fourth scroll, which contains the miracles of Jesiah and his death.
  • The next hint points them to the Human capital city of Shadowlyn, more specifically the ‘heart of the city’, which is the fortified castle in the middle of the fortified city. On their way they meet a human boy at nineteen years of age named Jaiden. Nolan immediately distrusts him.
  • They head there and make a plan for Nolan and her to sneak in.
  • Deep in the castle, Nolan turns and shows his true colors. He has been spying on them the whole time and is himself a Strangeling, half-human, and half-Dwarf. He reveals many secret abilities of Strangeling, like their strength and their enhanced abilities, and he also reveals that he had been raised strictly for the purpose of destroying the Strangeling that would defeat them.
  • Filynora is wounded and runs and hides. She is found by the help and tended to. After a week of hiding, she decides enough is enough and leads a revolt of Centaurs, Satyrs, Elves, and Dwarves and breaks out.
  • She breaks down at camp before talking to the group of people she had saved, and discovering the most influential Elf is her father.
  • She is branded a dangerous rogue and traitor and a bounty is put on all of their heads and Filynora decides they will need to attack the city to get the final scroll and fulfill the mission she was given, and in order to do that, they will need help.
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